Friday, March 13, 2009

Goldfluss


mind voice
mind song
colours of the soul
colour of hope
gold river
sandy music
beach blue

reach out
call me

sing your blues

sing orange

green font

grey sky

shades of white

green laugh
smell of hope

frozen hug

now!





13 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice pic..but your broken phrases look like Greek and Latin to me..i could only understand the half..by looking at pic, i was trying to understand what was missing words..!

saltyfish said...

and did it work?

Anonymous said...

don't know !

saltyfish said...

doesn't matter, as long as it pushes your imagination :-)

Anonymous said...

yes, you are right.

inserachofmuse said...

hmm- you took out your paint brush again - this one I shall ask from you to gift me - reason: Its you, sun melting into a brook of gold.

saltyfish said...

consider it yours, sis :-)

talldarkman said...

d'uh.....wot was that?

talldarkman

saltyfish said...

I call it poem and painting, don't know about you ;-)

Nitin Sinha said...

I call it imagination.

saltyfish said...

thank you nitu :-)

Ash said...

its very chaotic. but the 'NOW!' in the end gives a dramatic closure to it. i guess it's one such poem which has its effects the best when read aloud.

and the picture was superamazing.

saltyfish said...

*smiles*

thanks